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so first of all,i don´t want to be rude but i think the previous critique wasn´t even a critque at all,it was only compliments,if you requested a critique i assume you wish for a true constructive view of your piece,i hope i´ll be able to give you one
first of all,for a drawing made by finger this is quite impressive,but i think you shouldn´t have used that brush to the outline of the picture,it makes everything very blurry and messy and confusing,but then the coloring is very good!
well for the anatomy part,i suppose those are canines? i think if they are the same species,the one in the left has a much larger jaw than the one in the right,besides again how i told you,you shouldn´t have used this kind of brush for the outlines,if you didn´t have any more options i must apologize,
the blurry brush makes everything really hard to look to,like you have to squint,for example i can´t seem to find the one on the left´s eye!
the fact that you made this with your fingers is great,but i think you should practice and try it again without that kind of brush!
i hope my critique was of use!
-Anna
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HunaChima Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes I know, the first critique was my girlfriend... I was with her when she wrote it ;o;

It wasn't any serious drawing I just used my step mother's ipad cause I was bored. and actually that was the only brush in the app xD
and if you look at the rest of my gallery, my drawings are different.
Thanks for the critique anyway lol!
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FourDirtyPaws Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student General Artist
OH i get it!
nah it´s fine,you just asked for a critique so i yeah
uwu´´
yes i saw em <3
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HunaChima Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah c:
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